In the following examples you will find a draft of my Rhetorical Analysis along with the final copy of my Rhetorical Analysis that I submitted once all corrections were complete. I chose this rough draft to use for this revision exhibit because it clearly demonstrates the process behind my in-text citation process. At first glance, you may just see that I've highlighted the areas where a citation will need to be inserted, but I also use this process so I can re-evaluate all cited information that I've included in the paper and eliminate any information that may not be necessary prior to final submission. I find this method helps me to keep from repeating information that may be conveying the same information but worded differently. There are also times that I may decide to move the information around and use a certain citation in another area of the paper. I'm sure it would work the same if I were to include the citation and still highlight it, but then it feels more permanent to me so, I stick with my quirky way of adding the citations at the end!
